Feedback and Respone - Episode 2

Class feedback

• A couple of interesting shots
• Strange narrative, cannot understand it (7 People mentioned this)
• Cuts well
• Characters work well
• Sound levels are high & low (5 people mentioned this)
• Taster bit / preview works well (3 people mentioned this)
• Too much in one content in one episode (2 people mentioned this)
• Good angles used
• Jumps too much
• Pointless shots used
• Confusing genre (comedy or drama?)
• Acting is not very good, could be better
• Spy could of been done better, e.g appears in the room like is the skeleton
• Silent moments ned sorting out
• Need quicker cuts
• Continuity works well
• 'Jaws' sound / music cuts in too suddenly & drops out to early

Teacher feedback (Pete)

• Continuity with previous episode (costume, scripting) works well
• Elliot's character has been developed well
• Use of jaws music?
• Suddenly goes silent
• Much better editing than the 1st episode
• Add footage, where it goes black / silent?
• Like the taster for episode 3 at the end

Youtube comments and ratings
Compared to episode one this episode does not have as many; comments, ratings and views...
These are the comments

There are not as many comments on this episode compared to the first episode, and also there are as many positive, although some are positive, a lot are comments saying that they are finding it hard to like or get into the show, and some are complaining about the length of the show being to shot to get into it.

The are 4 rating with an average of 5 stars...which although there aren't as many rating is a high average rating than episode one.


Views...there aren't as many view for the second episode as there was for the first, which means that some people obviously watched episode one and didn't like it so didn't watch the next episode.



Over all although the video in my opinion is better than the first, some of the audience feels differently, the lenght of the show may need to be something we should think about, maybe people would be more interested if future episodes were a little longer, to give the audience more of the story at once, to keep them interested.